Question

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，昨天学校为你们举办了十八岁成人仪式。请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件，描述仪式过程并简述你的感受。
成人宣誓
感谢家长和老师的教育和培养
老师送贺卡
学生表演节目
注意：1．邮件必须包括以下要点，要适当发挥；
2．词数：100左右。
参考词汇：宣誓 make an oath
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                      
Yours，
LiHua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

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