Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此， 她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。内容包括：

1.介绍写信的目的；2.提出建议和理由；3.表达愿望。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

提示词：排球volleyball 高考college entrance examination

Dear Wang Fang,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Fang,

I’m sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I’m glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. As you said, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the college entrance examination.

First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents, who just want the best for you. Secondly, I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up. Thirdly, you should arrange your time properly. As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby, your teachers and parents will surely not object to it.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此, 她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。内容包括：1.介绍写信的目的；2.提出建议和理由；3.表达愿望。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be troubled by(被困扰)；be faced with(面临)；give up (放弃)；because of(因为)；college entrance examination (高考)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。