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11．如今，我们身边不乏"低头族"．他们在与朋友聚会、家人团聚或乘坐交通工具时，常常低头忙于浏览手机．请简要描述此现象，并发表你的看法．
提示词：低头族：phubbing
注意：1．词数：100左右；
      2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
The phenomenon that people are always phubbing is becoming more and more popular．
                                                                        

Answer 1

分析 本文属于议论文写作，人称以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时．写作要求为简要描述"低头族"在与朋友聚会、家人团聚或乘坐交通工具时，低头忙于浏览手机的现象，并阐述你对此现象的看法．
重要词汇：stare at （凝视，盯住）；no matter when （whenever）；get together （聚会）；be likely to （可能…）；Worse still（更糟糕的是）；cause serious accidents （导致严重的事故）；throw away （丢弃，扔掉）；
高分句型：1．Some people only stare at the screens of their phones，①ignoring the people around them no matter ②when they take a bus，hold a party or even get together with their families．
                ①句子的主语Some people 与动词ignore存在逻辑上的主谓关系，这里现在分词短语作伴随状语；②when引导一个时间状语从句．
                 2．①Worse still，they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games ②when they cross the road，③which is likely to cause serious accidents and frighten their lives．
                  3．It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up．
                  It is high time that…后面要用虚拟语气，所以动词用了一般过去时threw away 和raised．
                  4．Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us．
                  助动词do在句中表示强调，加强了语气．
                  ①运用短语Worse still增强了文章的感染力；②when引导一个时间状语从句；③which引导非限制性定语从句．

解答 The phenomenon that people are always phubbing is becoming more and more popular．Some people only stare at the screens of their phones，ignoring the people around them no matter when they take a bus，hold a party or even get together with their families（高分句型一）．Worse still，they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games when they cross the road，which is likely to cause serious accidents and frighten their lives（高分句型二）．
It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up（高分句型三）．Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us（高分句型四）．

点评 本题属于议论文写作，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，明确要点．2、注意将叙述、描写等手法结合到议论中，为议论提供依据．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．