Question

【题目】书面表达

阅读下面微博上的短文, 然后按要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。

Hi, everyone. I am Jane. I have a problem and don’t know what to do. So I need your help!

This morning I was ready to review my lessons with my computer in my dormitory, and then Mary, my roommate and best friend, came back with a laptop. She wanted to use my connector, and I did as she asked.

After a while, she took away my headset and opened her laptop. Afterwards she connected to the Internet with my connector. Then something unexpected happened. She used the audio player with the loudspeaker. She entered her QQ Zone and started using the video system to chat with my microphone. Sounds of music, QQ and their talking became louder and louder. She completely ignored that I was there reviewing my lessons.

I could not bear that, so I asked her to be quiet a little, but I failed. At last I had to go away to the classroom. On the way I became angrier and angrier because she was using my things, but never thought about my feeling. She drove me out. I am very sad. Am I her friend? Should I stop our friendship?

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词发表你的看法, 内容包括:

(1)你对Mary的行为的看法, 并说明理由;

(2)假如你是Jane, 你会如何处理这件事;

(3)以你的经历谈谈你和朋友相处的体会。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Jane was annoyed because her friend Mary used her things and interrupted her by chatting online and playing music loudly while she was reviewing lessons, which made her wonder whether she should continue their friendship or not.

In my opinion, what Mary did is too much for anyone in the world to bear. She is too self-centered and obviously cares about nobody, which is unacceptable and harmful.

If I were Jane, I would find time to have a face-to-face talk with Mary. I would tell her all about what I felt and what I thought about her. I would also tell her if she continues doing like that, nobody could put up with it and she would have no friends any more.

Once in my dormitory, there was a boy who acted like Mary too. Other roommates took the same attitude to him as Jane to Mary, but I decided to solve the problem by communicating actively with him. We helped him realize that his behavior was improper and unacceptable. Then he changed and now we are living together happily. It is active communication that helps solve the problem.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一篇议论文，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词发表对所给故事的看法,，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子：whether ...or not是否，In my opinion 在我看来，self-centered 自我关注，have a face-to-face talk with 与某人面对面交谈，thought about想.....，put up with忍受...，took the same attitude to采取一样的态度对待...，decided to决定，communicating actively with与某人积极交流。 Jane was annoyed because her friend Mary used her things and interrupted her by chatting online and playing music loudly是原因状语从句，which made her wonder whether she should continue their friendship or not. 是宾语从句，She is too self-centered and obviously cares about nobody, which is unacceptable and harmful..是主语从句， I would also tell her if she continues doing like that, nobody could put up with it and she would have no friends any more.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。