Question

你校某研究性学习小组正在开展关于“学生与家长、老师、同学之间的关系处理”的调查。请你就这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1．现状：关系处理总体情况较好，但仍存在一些问题，如与同学吵架、自我意识强、不听家长和老师的教育，甚至顶撞老师、家长等。
2．你个人的改进意见(至少两条)。
注意：1.词数150左右；
2．首句已给出，不计入总词数。
A survey about the relationship between students and teachers，family members or classmates is being made by a research study group of our school.________________________________

Answer 1

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A survey about the relationship between students and teachers，family members or classmates is being made by a research study group of our school. Generally speaking，we are getting on well with each other. However，there exist some problems. Some students are easy to lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden. Sometimes they are too self­centered. What’s worse，they sometimes quarrel with others，and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers and speak against their parents and teachers，which is very disappointing.
In my opinion，we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First，we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second，when we are not feeling happy，we can have a heart­to­heart chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.

试题分析：这是一篇以写调查报告形式的作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。