Question

你是李华，最近看到一则关于移居（immigrate to）加拿大的广告。你去信加拿大驻华使馆移民处了解具体的信息。要点如下：
如何成为加拿大公民？需要多长时间才能申请成功？
如果移民成功，能否凭国内的高中文凭直接上大学？如果不行，又有什么要求？
平均学费（tuition）、生活费（living expenses）以及奖学金信息。
注意：1.词数120字左右
2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Chinese high school student. I am writing to ask fo more information concerning immigration to Canada.________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear sir and madam，
I am a Chinese high school student. I am writing to ask for more information concerning immigration to Canada. I have read a recent advertisement that asked people to considering immigrating to Canada. I’m very interested in it, but I want some detailed information.
Firstly, I would like to know how one is able to become a Canada citizen, and how soon this could be achieved.
Secondly, as I am going to get the high school diploma in China， I wonder if I can go to university directly in Canada, provided that I get accepted. If not, what qualifications do I need to go to university?
Finally, I would like to know the average tuition and living expenses each year. Could you tell me something about the scholarships the government and universities offer to students.
I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。