Question

请根据某天发生在校园中的一个情景，先对漫画“垃圾筒旁边的垃圾”的内容迸行简要描 述，然后对这一现象简要发表自己的看法并提出一些倡议。开头已给出，不计入总词数内。

要求：1．适当发挥，语言连贯。 2．词数100词左右。

参考词汇：社会公德social morality 缺乏(n. vt.) lack

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One day a boy was eating a banana in the campus. After eating it up, he wanted to throw the skin into the dustbin, but it dropped outside. Although the dustbin was near/The dustbin being near, he didn’t want to take any trouble to pick it up but went away directly, thinking that someone else would clean the rubbish. The banana skin smelt bad after a while.

Obviously, what the boy did shows a lack of social morality. Nowadays some people consider it of little value to observe social morality and become more selfish and indifferent. We need to take action to develop a sound system which advocates good behaviours and keep all necessary disciplines and requirements in mind, thus creating a harmonious social environment benefiting others as well as ourselves. Personally, the most effective way is that we should raise people’s awareness and act morally individually.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇漫画作文。根据某天发生在校园中的一个情景，先对漫画“垃圾桶旁边的垃圾”的内容进行简要描述，然后对这一现象简要发表自己的看法并提出一些倡议。写作时要注意准确运用时态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色，注意要求的字数在100词左右，不要太多或太少。

【亮点说明】Obviously, what the boy did shows a lack of social morality.包含了what引导的主语从句，并运用了obviously/a lack of这样的高级词汇、短语；Although the dustbin was near/The dustbin being near, he didn’t want to take any trouble to pick it up but went away directly, thinking that someone else would clean the rubbish.包含了although引导的让步状语从句，并运用了非谓语动词thinking---作状语；We need to take action to develop a sound system which advocates good behaviours and keep all necessary disciplines and requirements in mind, thus creating a harmonious social environment benefiting others as well as ourselves.包含了which引导的定语从句，thus后的非谓语动词creating---在句中作结果状语。