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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处价格漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起），不计分。

In the winter vacation, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Luoyang. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】visit后加to

【2】when改为than

【3】surprising改为surprised

【4】been去掉

【5】cleanly改为clean

【6】himself改为themselves

【7】第八句make改为makes;

【8】set改为sets;

【9】It改为What

【10】a改为the

【解析】

【1】visit后加to 考查固定搭配：pay a visit to对---的访问，故在visit后加to。

【2】when改为than 固定句式：no sooner---than---一---就---，故把when改为than。

【3】surprising改为surprised 句意：我看到这些变化感到非常惊讶。所以把surprising改为surprised。

【4】been去掉 句意：这远远超过我的预测。此处表示主动形式，故把been去掉。

【5】cleanly改为clean 句意：干净的自来水。形容词修饰名词，故把cleanly改为clean。

【6】himself改为themselves 句意：村民们不再自己挑水，是复数形式，故把himself改为themselves。

【7】make改为makes; 句意：沼气是一种便宜又干净的新能源，它使做饭和照明更方便。根据句意可知用一般现在时态，故把make改为makes。

【8】set改为sets; 根据句意可知此处用复数形式，故把set改为sets。

【9】It改为What 句意：给我留下印象最深刻的是在这个村子里最好的建筑物是学校。此处考查主语从句，主语从句缺少主语和引导词，故把It改为What。

【10】a改为the 句意：在这个村子里最好的建筑物是学校。故把a改为the。