Question

自央视推出了家风系列访谈，全社会掀起了谈论家风、反思家风的热潮。你的笔友Peter收看后写信向你询问：你的家风是什么？假如你是李华，给Peter回信，根据以下关键词，从中选取适合你的角度，并结合个人经历，晒出你的家风。

注意：1． 词数：120左右，适当发挥； 2． 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3． 不得透露个人相关信息。

Dear Peter,

I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses． _____________________________________

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What about your ideas about it ? Looking forward to your letter．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Peter,

I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses． Different families hold different focuses of family tradition, such as unity, love and care, honesty, diligence, respect and responsibility．

Now, I’d like to introduce ours to you — hard-working, which my family would appreciate permanently. In the morning, my grandma usually gets up early, prepares us a good breakfast, and then begins to do other jobs. She works slowly, but always makes everything clean. Under the influence of my grandmother, my mother also does quite well both in her work and at home. Because of this attitude, every year she was titled "outstanding communist．" After dinner, she often gives up entertainment, helping our family with housework． It’s my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds that make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly, never quitting until removing it． I serve as a good help to my teachers and classmates as well as my family．Hardworking has deeply rooted in my heart in the form of invisible power．

Family education is an important part of Chinese traditional culture and education． It can be a life of truth; also the principle of doing things． Good family tradition pushes one generation after another to ensure children’s healthy growth, whose positive energy promotes social progress of civilization．

What about your ideas about it? Looking forward to your letter．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

 试题分析: 图表作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文要求以李华的身份根据背景提示写出自己的家风。内容完整，层次清楚。第一段，提出不同的家庭有不同的家风such as unity, love and care, honesty, diligence, respect and responsibility．在第二段说明自家的家风是hard-working，最后提到家风的重要性，良好的家庭教育是孩子健康成长的保障，也是推动社会文明进步的正能量。并注意了句子的变化和衔接。同时文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如which引导的非限制性定语从句、but、and连接的并列句、非谓语动词和 as well as。

考点:图表类作文。