Question

7．阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
An increasing number of students fall in love at an early age and create problems with their studies，which has aroused the school's attention．A middle school has set a"distance for civilized communication"between boy and girl students．Boys and girls should keep a distance of at least 50 centimeters when they talk in public，otherwise they will be criticized or get an even severer punishment，says an article in Beijing News．
It seems that the school has passed the school regulation to prevent girls and boys from falling in love at an early age and creating problems for the school authorities．Some teachers and parents approve of the regulation because it is of vital importance to the teenagers'study．However，many experts say the problem，if it is one，can be better solved through communication．
It is natural for a teenager to have a feeling of love on someone from the opposite sex．It is natural for girls and boys to be attracted to each other as they mature sexually．
In fact，normal communication between boy and girl students is good not only for their emotional development and personality refinement，but also for their relationship when they grow up．
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词描述"文明交往距离规定"的利弊，并谈谈你对异性交往的看法．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
From the article，we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age，which has caused different opinions．
In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction，disturbing themselves．With such a school rule carried out，it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication．Meanwhile，however，it's not good for the students'emotional development and normal relationship．
Personally，I hold a right attitude towards communication with the opposite gender．I'll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls，but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary．It's of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：set a regulation （制度定规章制度），civilized communication（文明交流），fall in love with…（与…谈恋爱），resist sth（抵制某事），disturb sb （干扰，扰乱某人），carry out （实施，执行），be of great help （有帮助），take control of（控制），hold a right attitude towards（持有一个正确的态度），get on well with （与…相处），keep a certain personal distance（保持一定的私人距离），bury oneself in…（全身心投入），because of（由于）．
【高分句型一】
1．we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age，which has caused different opinions．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction，disturbing themselves．
此处是现在分词短语"disturbing themselves"作伴随状语，主句为"In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction"，主句的主语为"some students"与动词"disturb"构成逻辑上的主动关系．
【高分句型三】
3．With such a school rule carried out，it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication．
此处"with复合结构"作原因状语，结构为"with+宾语（物）+宾补（过去分词）"，主句为"it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication．"．
【高分句型四】
4．keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary．
此处是由动名词短语"keeping a certain personal distance"作主语，谓语动词用单数．
【高分句型五】
5．It's of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love．
此处为此处是主语从句，结构为"It+be+of+名词+for sb+to do sth"．

解答 From the article，we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age，which has caused different opinions．【高分句型一】（概括）
In our daily school life some students can't resist the opposite gender's attraction，disturbing themselves．【高分句型二】With such a school rule carried out，it's of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication．【高分句型三】Meanwhile，however，it's not good for the students'emotional development and normal relationship．（说明现实生活中许多人虽有梦想但没有实现的原因）
Personally，I hold a right attitude towards communication with the opposite gender．I'll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls，but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary．【高分句型四】It's of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love．【高分句型五】（个人观点：谈谈对异性交往的看法）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．