Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My young cousin Tom seems to have endless question to ask every day. One day, he asked me how life on earth began after watch a film. To be honest, the question remains a puzzle to me. Therefore, in order not to let him down, I found the answer in a book. It says, “Long ago the earth was a cloud dust. The dust settled into a solid globe before billions of years. The earth became such violent that it exploded loud. Then water, that is important for life to develop, began to appear. As the time went on, different life forms began.”

Answer 1

【小题1】question → questions
【小题2】watch → watching
【小题3】remains → remained
【小题4】Therefore → However
【小题5】cloud后加of
【小题6】before → after
【小题7】such → so
【小题8】loud → loudly
【小题9】that → which
【小题10】去掉the

解析试题分析：
【小题1】question是可数名词，endless后面是可数名词复数 questions
【小题2】after这里是介词，后面接动名词：watch → watching
【小题3】这篇文章用的是过去时：remains → remained
【小题4】这些问题对我来说是个迷，但是为了不让他失望，我在书上找到答案：Therefore → However
【小题5】a cloud of是词组“一片”，cloud后加of
【小题6】在几十亿年后，灰尘变成了固体的地球：before → after
【小题7】修饰形容词副词用so，such → so
【小题8】修饰动词：exploded 应该是副词：loud → loudly
【小题9】这是非限制性定语从句，不能用that引导，用which：that → which
【小题10】这里的time是抽象名词“时间”，不加冠词，去掉the
考点：考查各种语法的综合运用
点评：短文改错对考生的语法和上下文串联的要求最高。考生要非常细心的串联上下文进行语法分析，再提出修改。