Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华。最近，一批来自澳大利亚的高中生将来你校访问。请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动。内容包括：

1.参观校园；

2.观看介绍学校的短片；

3.体验中国的传统节日—重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Friends,

Welcome to our school.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

Welcome to our school. I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Council. Now I’d like to tell you something about the schedule for your visit.

First of all, I will show you around our campus so that you can get a general impression of our school. After that, you’ll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school. What’s more, you will participate in some activities to celebrate the Double Ninth Festival-one of the Chinese traditional festivals, which will provide a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture. I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.

In a word, I hope you can have a good stay with us and enjoy yourselves.

Thanks.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是学生会主席李华。最近，一批来自澳大利亚的高中生将来你校访问。请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动。要注意发言稿的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般将来时来写。要点：1.参观校园；2.观看介绍学校的短片；

3.体验中国的传统节日—重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: First of all首先，What’s more另外。还使用了定语从句After that, you’ll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school.和宾语从句I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。