Question

9．假如你校要举办一次主题为"How to Communicate with Friends"的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿．要点如下：
1．尊重并信任朋友；  2．常与朋友聊天；  3．换位思考问题．
注意：
1．词数100左右，题目已给出；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：换位思考：put oneself in sb．'s shoes．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow 朋友是我们可以与之分享快乐和悲伤的人．
高分句型二：
 Don't be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions 即使有时他们冒犯了你，千万不要对他们凶．
句型一  who can share our happiness and sorrow  该句是一个由who 引导的定语从句，who在从句中做主语，代替前面的先行词people
句型二 ①Don't be rude to them 该句是一个祈使句，且此处使用了否定形式 ②even if they offend you on some occasions  该句是一个由even if 引导的让步状语从句

解答 Hello，everyone，I'd like to share with you my ideas about this topic．Friends are the people who can share our happiness and sorrow．（高分句型一） Everyone needs friends to care about，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them．（提出论点） Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with friends．
   In the first place，we should respect and trust our friends．Don't be rude to them even if they offend you on some occasions．（高分句型二） Second，if we often talk with them about our life and  experience，the friendship can be strengthened．Third，if sometimes we don't agree with each other over some minor thins，we should try to put oursleves in their shoes as friendship should be established on understanding each other．（阐述原因）
   Thank you for listening．

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了写作要点．考生在写作时应将所列要点用合适的衔接词合理的联系起来，紧密联系主题，切忌过于发散思维．另外再运用准确的、简洁明了的语言将文章阐述清楚．