Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的美国笔友Jim 对中华传统文化很感兴趣，经常与你讨论这方面的话题。请你给他写一封邮件，谈谈你曾参加过的一次相关活动，内容包括：

1. 介绍活动内容；

2. 说明参加的理由；

3. 表达参加后的感受。

注意：1. 词数100 左右;

2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

How's everything going? I know you're interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I'm writing to tell you one of my recent experiences.

I visited the Capital Museum during the winter vacation and explored Chinese history culture. I chose it as my destination because it houses a variety of exhibits, like paintings, antiques crafts and so on. Besides, the architecture of the museum features the combination of tradition and modernity.

The visit is indeed worthwhile. I'm amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people and impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization.

Feel an ich for the visit? I'd like to show you around the museum. Waiting for your coming!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给Jim写信，给他讲述你曾经参加的和中国传统文化相关的一次活动，并谈谈自己的感受。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

表明写信目的

1. 介绍活动内容；

2． 说明参加的理由；

3. 表达参加后的感受。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

take part in/ be related to/ be interested in/ introduce sb. sth./have a better understanding of/ show sb. around/ a variety of/the reason for

第三步：连词成句

How's everything going?

Knowing you're interested in traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to tell you one of my recent experiences.

I paid a visit to the Capital Museum during the winter vacation and explored Chinese history culture.

The reason why I chose it as my destination was that it houses a variety of exhibits, such as paintings, antiques crafts and so on.

The architecture of the museum features the combination of tradition and modernity.

I' m amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people and impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization.

I' d like to show you around the museum.

Looking forward to your coming!

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）