Question

假定你是南阳一中某班学生李华，对于你们校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为有感而发，请用英语给你校杨校长写封信。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写信目的；

2.对于这些行为进行批评；

3.提出建议。

注意：信的抬头，落款及日期以给出。

Jan26.2013

Dear Head master Yang,

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Jan26.2013

Dear Headmaster Yang,

I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, SeniorⅡ, I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students: Littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。

考点：考查建议信作文

点评：建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。