Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写。

The environment pollution was more and more serious today. We have no dean Water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. Peopled health has been great affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of diseases causing by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world. We should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bag. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting it down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.

Answer 1

【答案】1.第—句：was-is

2.第二句：去掉it

3.第三句：trees后加are

4.第五句：great-greatly

5.第六句：causing-caused

6.第七句：the-a

7.第八句：what-which

8.第九句：so-as

9.第十句：bag-bags

10.第十一句：it-them

【解析】1.句意：今天环境的污染越来越严重。可知句子用一般现在时态，故把was---is。

2.句意：因为污染我们没有干净的水喝。动词不定式做后置定语，并且动词不定式与所修饰的词之间是动宾关系。故把it去掉。

3.句意：树被砍倒的时候，一些动物消失了.when引导的时间状语从句用一般现在时态的被动语态，trees是从句主语，故在trees后加are。

4.副词修饰动词，故把great-greatly。

5.句意：很多人死于被污染引起的疾病。过去分词做后置定语，故把causing-caused。

6.句意：为了过上一个更好的生活。故把the-a。

7.前面是整个句子作先行词，后面的非限制性定语从句用which引导，故把what-which。

8.固定搭配：as---as possible尽可能，故把so-as。

9.句意：不要用塑料袋。根据句意可知用名词复数形式，故把bag-bags。

10.句意：我们一定要种更多的树，并且阻止人们砍伐它们。故把it---them。