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17.请改正下面短文中的错误.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉; 
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

The first time I went away from home without my parents was when I was ten.I go on a school trip with my class to the zoo in Beijing.We left home earlier in the morning because we had long journey.We travelled to Beijing with bus and we spent the whole day at the zoo.
I can remember see an elephant for the first time.I was very exciting!At midday,we ate out picnic lunch in a park near the zoo.After lunch,they visited the reptile house but saw the snakes and crocodiles.It was fantastic.At five o'clock,we got on the bus and we drove to home.I was a little tired,but I was very happily.It was the best trip I can remember!

分析 文章讲述了我第一次和同学去动物园玩的经历.我们一大早坐公交车去了动物园,第一次看到了大象,我很激动.我们还在公园里野餐,还去爬行动物馆看了蛇和鳄鱼,太美妙了.回家时,我有点累,但很开心.那是一次最棒的旅行.

解答 The first time I went away from home without my parents was when I was ten.I go on a school trip with my class to the zoo in Beijing.We left home earlier in the morning because we had∧long journey.We travelled to Beijing with bus and we spent the whole day at the zoo.
I can remember see an elephant for the first time.I was very exciting!At midday,we ate out picnic lunch in a park near the zoo.After lunch,they visited the reptile house but saw the snakes and crocodiles.It was fantastic.At five o'clock,we got on the bus and we drove to home.I was a little tired,but I was very happily.It was the best trip I can remember!
详解:
1.go改为went;时态错误.文章讲述的是过去发生的事情,要用一般过去时态.
2.earlier改为early;比较级错误.句意没有表示比较,不能用比较级.
3.加a;构成错误.句意表达的是泛指一次很远的旅行,要用不定冠词来限定.
4.with改为by;短语搭配错误.by bus坐公共汽车.
5.see改为seeing;动词搭配错误.remember doing sth记得做过某事.
6.exciting改为excited;形容词错误.句意表达的是我的感受,要用过去分词形式.
7.they改为we;逻辑指代错误.句意指代的是我们,不是他们.
8.but改为and;连词错误.句意表达的是并列,不是转折.
9.to去掉.介词错误.句中home是副词,不需要加介词.
10.happily改为happy;副词错误.句中happy作系动词的表语,要用形容词形式.

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.

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