假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，
每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Time fly like an arrow．I'm already in Senior Grade 3 before I realized it．It will be only a little more than eight months before I graduate middle school．At the present，I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination．I hope to go to Beijing University，that is one of the best university not only in China but also in the world．I'll try my best to turn your dream into reality．Most of my classmates are also studying very hardly to realize their dreams．I do believe everyone will be able to enter an university or college．

分析作为一名即将毕业的高三学生，作者在感慨时间过得飞快，努力学习的同时，表达了经过自己以及同学们的努力，他们分别都会考入自己理想的大学的信心与决心．

解答 Timeflylike an arrow．I'm already in Senior Grade 3 before Irealizedit．
It will be only a little more than eight months before I graduate∧middle
school．Atthe present，I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the
College Entrance Examination．I hope to go to Beijing University，that is
one of the bestuniversitynot only in China but also in the world．I'll try my
best to turn your dream into reality．Most of my classmates are also studying
veryhardlyto realize their dreams．I do believe everyone will be able to
enter an university or college．
详解：
1．fly改为flies    考查时态以及主谓一致   根据下文使用了一般现在时可知，此处描述的是现在的情况；由于主语Time是不可数名词，故谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式；故用flies．
2．realized改为realize    考查时态   根据上下文都使用了一般现在时可知，此处描述的是作者现在的情况；故用realize．
3．graduate后加from   考查固定短语      graduate from意为：从…毕业；故在graduate后加from．
4．去掉present之前的the   考查固定短语    at present意为：目前，现在；故去掉present之前的the．
5．review改为reviewing   考查固定短语    be busy doing sth．意为：忙于做某事；故用reviewing．
6．that改为which   考查关系代词     本句为非限定性的定语从句；由于先行词Beijing University在该从句中作主语，而关系代词that不能用于此类从句中，故用which．
7．university改为universities   考查名词的单复数   此处指的是：众多最好的大学（中的一个）；故用复数名词universities．
8．your改为my   考查句意理解以及人称代词的一致性    本句的意思是：我会尽我最大的努力把我的梦想变成现实，此处指的是：我的梦想；故用my．
9．hardly改为hard   考查副词词义辨析    hardly意为：几乎不；hard意为：努力地；此处指的是：非常努力地学习；故用hard．
10．an改为a 考查不定冠词   此处用在名词university之前，表示泛指一所大学；由于university首字母的发音为元音/ju/；故用an．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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