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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was walking my dog around my local streets last Sunday when I meet a new couple. They liked my dog but gave it a sandwich. I thanked them and had a chat to them. They said they had just been moved into the community. Unfortunate, they had a troublesome neighbour that was rather noisy at night, making it hard for them to fall asleep. "Oh, it,s great pity. I think I' m quite lucky to have kind neighbours, "I said.

Say out goodbyes, we separated. As I and my dog was near my home, I was embarrassed to see that my new friends were walking towards the house next to me. I was thee noisy neighbour!

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【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我带着狗散步时，认识了一对新搬来的夫妇。我们聊天时，得知他们有一个晚上相当吵闹的讨厌邻居。当我和我的狗靠近我家时，我尴尬地看到我的新朋友正走向我房子旁边的房子，原来我就是那个讨厌的邻居。

第一处：考查时态。根据时间状语last Sunday，可知是发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以meet改成met。

第二处：考查连词。句意：他们喜欢我的狗，并且给了它一块三明治。文中表示并列关系，所以but改成and。

第三处：考查语态。they had just moved into the community.作said的宾语，所以they had just moved into the community.是一个宾语从句。在宾语从句中，“他们”和“搬到”之间是主动关系，用主动语态，所以去掉been。

第四处：考查副词。句意：不幸的是，他们有一个晚上相当吵闹的讨厌邻居。修饰整个句子，用副词，所以Unfortunate改成Unfortunately。

第五处：考查非限制性定语从句。who was rather noisy at night作定语，修饰a troublesome neighbour，逗号把主从句隔开，所以who was rather noisy at night是一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指人，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，所以that改成who。

第六处：考查冠词。句意：这是一个巨大的遗憾。泛指“一个遗憾”，great的首字母发音是元音，所以填不定冠词a。

第七处：考查非谓语动词。Say的逻辑主语是we，它们之间是主动关系，用现在分词作状语，所以say改成saying。

第八处：考查主谓一致。句意：当我和我的狗靠近我家时，我尴尬地看到我的新朋友正走向我房子旁边的房子。文中“我和我的狗”是复数，所以was改成were。

第九处：考查物主代词。句意：当我和我的狗靠近我家时，我尴尬地看到我的新朋友正走向我房子旁边的房子。文中表示“我的房子”，后面没有名词，用名词性物主代词，所以me改成mine。