Question

20．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：
1．景点名称；
2．参观内容；
3．推荐理由．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
Glad to hear that you are coming．As for the scenery spot，Ido think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice，which is in Yanqing District in Beijing．As is known，the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world．（推荐的旅游地）Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall，you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall，very impressive．Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps，which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming．However，along the way，you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries，enormous monuments full of culture，and splendid beacon towers，which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement．Averagely，it will take you two hours to get to the top，where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement．（参观内容）As is said in China，he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．The Great Wall is the treasure of our country，and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing．It is，of course，a must-see for you!You can't miss it!Just come and enjoy yourself!Looking forward to your arrival!（推荐理由）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是介绍长城的书信，根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：1．景点名称；2．参观内容；3．推荐理由．
高分句型：
1 As for the scenery spot，I do think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice，which is in Yanqing District in Beijing．句子里As for 表示"关于，至于"； do是对谓语动词 think 强调的助动词；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词the Badaling Great Wall．
至于景点，我认为八达岭长城是一个完美的选择，它在延庆．
2．As is said in China，he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．句子里．As 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句，译为"正如"；定语从句who does not reach the Great Wall 修饰先行词he，he是主句的主语．
中国有句古话，不到长城非好汉．

解答 Dear Jim，
Glad to hear that you are coming．As for the scenery spot，I do think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice，which is in Yanqing District in Beijing．【高分句型一】As is known，the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world．（推荐的旅游地）Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall，you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall，very impressive．Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps，which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming．However，along the way，you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries，enormous monuments full of culture，and splendid beacon towers，which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement．Averagely，it will take you two hours to get to the top，where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement．（参观内容）As is said in China，he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．【高分句型二】The Great Wall is the treasure of our country，and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing．It is，of course，a must-see for you!You can't miss it!Just come and enjoy yourself!Looking forward to your arrival!（推荐理由）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作前要审题，在审题时务必做到以下几点：
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　　3．明确作文的表达内容和顺序．作文中要表达什么？怎样表达？先表达什么，再表达什么？重点表达什么？这些都是要求考生在写作时必须关注的．要在作文中做到主次分明、表达准确、承上启下，不给人一种泛泛而谈、模糊而凌乱的感觉．