Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你的笔友林涛来信说，因学习忙、锻炼少，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。

要点包括：

1.锻炼的重要性；

2.锻炼有利学习；

3.提出锻炼建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future, for example, jogging and playing basketball.

Time spent in exercise is wasted. Actually, exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind. Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.

Therefore, I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇书信。笔友林涛来信说，因学习忙、锻炼少，最近经常生病，影响学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。要点包括：锻炼的重要性；锻炼有利学习；提出锻炼建议。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，结构严谨，语言精练，文中使用高级词汇和句子。You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health.句中so---that引导的结果状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句完美结合；It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future,运用if条件句；Time spent in exercise is wasted.过去分词做后置定语；Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.部分倒装经典运用；I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day. Suggest后面的宾语从句使用虚拟语气；另外，for example，Actually, Therefore,等的运用为文章增色添彩。