Question

【题目】下面是你同学的一篇英文习作，请你帮助修改这篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改仅限一次。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChina’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 richpeople.
Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.

Answer 1

【答案】his→whose；owned→owns；rich→richest；fought→fighting；去掉in；he和introduced 之间加上was；before→when/after；in→ on；obviously→obvious；all→ both
【解析】①his→whose 考察定语从句，非限制性定语从句中用关系代词whose。代指上文Jack Ma的。
②owned→owns 考察时态的一致性，这里阐述的是一般的事实情况，故owned→owns。
③rich→richest 考察形容词最高级，句意：但是他仍然在世界10大富翁之外。这里应该用最高级，表示世界上最富有的10个人，故rich→richest。
④fought→fighting 现在分词作状语，动词fight和主语 Ma主动关系，故fought→fighting。
⑤去掉in 考察定语从句，关系代词which指代先行词a translationagency，在定语从句中做主语，故去掉in。
⑥he和introduced 之间加上was考察动词被动语态，主语他和动词介绍是被动关系，故he和introduced 之间加上was。
⑦before→when/after 考察连词，句意：当他被偶然的被任命带美国游客 Jerry Yang参观长城时/之后，他的命运注定要改变。根据句意故before→when/after。
⑧in→ on 考察介词，take sb on atour 带某人去参观。
⑨obvious→obviously 考察副词，句意：很明显这次会面对于他们都是转折点。这里应该用副词修饰句子。故obvious→obviously。
⑩all→ both 考察代词，句意：很明显这次会面对于他们两位都是转折点。根据上文可知是两个人见面，故all→ both。