Question

【题目】假定你是高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Tony给你发来邮件，询问高考延期后你的近况。请根据以下要点给他写封回信，内容包括:

1.感谢关心;

2.你目前的学习情况。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

Many thanks for your concern! Though Gaokao has been postponed due to the overwhelming COVID-19 ,it is approaching day by day.

Currently, I' m under unbearable pressure with endless tests to sit. I sometimes suffer test anxiety , which does upset me a lot. But what can't beat me can only serve to make me stronger. I' m positive that with adequate preparations, I' m getting closer and closer to my dream-to be a doctor to relieve pains of patients, which will motivate me to study harder.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Tony回信，告诉他高考延期后自己的近况。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 感谢关心;

2.你目前的学习情况。

第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)

thanks for；due to；under pressure

第三步: 连词成句

Many thanks for your concern!

Though Gaokao has been postponed due to the overwhelming COVID-19 ,it is approaching day by day.

Currently, I' m under unbearable pressure with endless tests to sit.

But what can't beat me can only serve to make me stronger.

I' m positive that with adequate preparations, I' m getting closer and closer to my dream-to be a doctor to relieve pains of patients, which will motivate me to study harder.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing,On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改