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3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月六日到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文．来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房．请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知他你愿意提供哪些帮助．
面积：40m2，月租：1000元

 注意：1．词数：100左右；2．参考词汇：房租-rent（n．）．
Dear Bob，
                                                               
Looking forward to your early coming．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇文章要求为远道而来的笔友介绍住房情况．可以看到提示有两张图，分别画了公交车路线和房屋平面图．可知考生要介绍去往住房的路线以及住房的结构布局．另外还要说明可以提供的帮助．所以作文可分这三点来写．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
be located on，坐落于，have easy access to，便于去，hesitate to do sth．犹豫做某事

高分句子：
1．Having learned that you are coming on September 6 and need a flat，I have found a suitable one for you．前半句为现在分词做伴随状语，丰富句子结构．
2．you will have easy access to Jianxin Chinese School，where you are to take courses．本句中含where引导的有非限制性定语从句，做地点状语．

解答 Dear Bob，
    Having learned that you are coming on September 6 and need a flat，I have found a suitable one for you．（高分句型）
    The flat with a size of 40 square meters is located on Fangcao Street and you will have easy access to Jianxin Chinese School，where you are to take courses．（高分句型）Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school．（说明路线）Besides，the flat is well furnished with a separate bathroom and a kitchen attached where hot water is available in 24 hours and free internet access is offered．Furthermore，the rent is only 1000 yuan per month．（介绍住房）
    If you don't like it，feel free to let me know and I will find another one for you．What's more，if you have any confusion about life in China，don't hesitate to contact me．（提供帮助）
    Looking forward to your early coming．
Yours
Li Hua

点评 考生在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体．