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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The sentence from our teachers tell us that we shouldn't be discouraged after failures.Definitely we should keep trying with determine.Success lies in the ability to continue efforts despite failures.

At the age of twelve,I get a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.Besides,it was harder than expecting.The bike seemed too heavy for me to control and I fell off the bike over and over again.I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice,I found me doing better and better.Looking back,I feel I would not be able to ride bike if I had lost my heart.

Honest speaking,we can't avoid failing.What matters most is that we should stick to it.

Answer 1

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【解析】（1）考查动词，句子讲究主谓一致，句子主语为The sentence，为单数，故谓语应该用三单，故改为tells。

（2）考查名词，with为介词，常用搭配为介宾短语，故此处应该用名词，故改为determination.

（3）考查时态，时间为At the age of twelve意思是在我12岁时，时间是过去，所以应该用过去时，故改为got。

（4）考查连词，I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.Besides,it was harder than expecting.意思是我想亲自试试，然而，他比想象中的难。两个句子之间构成转折关系，故改为however。

（5）考查动词，I expected to do something 意思是我想要干某事，故此处改为expected。

（6）考查连词，while指的是段时间，when指的是点时间，此处是指爸爸鼓励我的那一刻，为点时间，故改为when。

（7）考查反身代词，I found me doing better and better意思是我发现自己可以做的很好，表示自己故改为myself。

（8）考查名词，ride a bike 意思是是骑自行车，故添加a。

（9）考查固定短语，lost heart意思是粗心，故去掉my.

（10）考查副词，修饰动词用副词，此处修饰speaking，故改为Honestly。