Question

假如某报社记者Smith正在调查我们学校学生与家庭成员和班级同学老师之间的关系处理情况，请你把以上的情况向Smith反映并提出一些如何改进关系的意见。

要点如下：1．目前的实际情况：学生与家庭成员以及班级同学的关系处理总体上是好的，但也存在着一些问题，与同学吵架，不听从家长和老师的教育等。

 2．你个人的改进意见（至少两条）。

注意：1．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2．词数：100字左右

Answer 1

Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers is good．We are getting on well with each other．However, there exist some problems．Some students in our school are easy to lose their temper because of anxiety and study burden．What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing．

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation．First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates．Second, when we are not feeling good/happy, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents．It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice．

解析:

这篇文章要点表达要完整而准确，清楚展示主题。可以先提出文章的主题，进而列出赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后可以给出反面的观点，论据要十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后要连贯。