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第二节：书面表达（共25分）
现在你已是一名高中生了，假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示和要求给你妈妈发一封电子邮件。
母亲节快要到了，为了感恩母亲，你该向她说什么呢？
提示：1、感谢母亲多年的养育和教育之恩。
2、美好回忆：惹她生气时，她总能理解我；生病时，她总能给我最好的照顾；考试成绩不好时，她总能鼓励我；教会我要帮助有困难的人及如何做人等。
3、向妈妈谈谈你的理想和打算。
要求：1、不能逐词逐句地翻译，可以适当地添加内容。
2、不少于120词.    
Dear Mum,
How are you? Mother’s Day is drawing near, and I would like to say_______________________
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_______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,    
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mum,
How are you? Mother’s Day is drawing near, and I would like to say“happy mother’s day”here 。I loveyou and thank you so much for everything you did for me 。thank you for so many years of my education and training。I’m very grateful to you for taking care of me。
In my heart are many beautiful memories 。I always made you angry ，but you were always very understanding。When I was sick，you were always in every possible way taking care of my。When I failed the examination，you always encouraged me to cheer up and not to lose heart 。you always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble. When I did good deeds, you were always thinking highly of me. I am really thankful to you for your teaching me how to be “a real person”.
Now I have grown up, and I feel that I should not be so naive. I will not live up to your expectations! I will work harder and make greater progress in my study for my ideal university. I’m sorry but I stay away and can‘t give you my appreciation at home. Mum, I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice, so don‘t worry about me. I hope you have a wonderful mother‘s day and you are happy every day.         
Yours,
Li Hua

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