Question

15．上周，你校举办了一场运动会，有乒乓球、篮球、跑步、跳远、跳高等项目．同学们积极参加，踊跃报名并相互鼓励．请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇题为"The School Sports Meeting"的短文向你校广播电台的英语专栏投稿．
提示：
1运动会的时间、地点、活动内容；
2同学们的表现；
3你的简要评论．
注意：
1词数100左右；
2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
The School Sports Meeting
The annual sports meeting took place in our school last week．There were many events the students could take part in，like basketball，table tennis，running，high jump and long jump．（高分句型一）
A lot of students couldn't wait to take part in it and they encouraged each other to do better．On the playground，we saw many students cheering for the players and athletes．What a moving scene!What's more，some students broke the school records．（高分句型二）
The sports meeting was a complete success，I believe．It not only helps the students to realize the importance of exercise，but also brings the students together!（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英语写一篇题为"The School Sports Meeting"的短文向校广播电台的英语专栏投稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：运动会的时间、地点、活动内容；同学们的表现；你的简要评论． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take place举行；发生；take part in参加；couldn't wait to 迫不及待地；cheer for为…加油；What's more而且；not only，but also不仅，而且
There were many events the students could take part in，like basketball，table tennis，running，high jump and long jump．（高分句型一）
What's more，some students broke the school records．（高分句型二）
It not only helps the students to realize the importance of exercise，but also brings the students together!（高分句型三）

解答 The School S ports Meeting
     The annual sports meeting took place in our school last week．There were many events the students could take part in，like basketball，table tennis，running，high jump and long jump．（高分句型一）
     A lot of students couldn't wait to take part in it and they encouraged each other to do better．On the playground，we saw many students cheering for the players and athletes．What a moving scene!What's more，some students broke the school records．（高分句型二）
     The sports meeting was a complete success，I believe．It not only helps the students to realize the importance of exercise，but also brings the students together!（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．