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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

Very happy to have heard you. In your last e-mail, you asked me for the advices on how to travel casually in China. Now I’d like to share my opinion.

Nowadays, take China’s high-speed trains is a popular way to travel. Firstly, it’s fast and convenient. By the end of last year, the high-speed railways have been built in most of the cities in China, which could help people travel to different places fast than ever. Up to now, the high-speed railway network has covered the total of 22,000 kilometers. Secondly, it’s stable. In 2015, which a Swedish man videoed surprised the whole world. She erected(竖立) a coin on the windowsill or it stood for 8 minutes. How amazing! So, buddy, why not to have a try?

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

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【解析】1.句意：很高兴收到你的来信。hear from收到某人的来信，故在heard后面加from。

2.advice 是不可数名词，故答案为advice。

3.第二段第一句话没有主语，所以用动名词做主语，故把take---taking。

4.根据By the end of last year,可知句子用过去完成时态，故把have---had。

5.根据后面的than可知句子用比较级，故把fast---faster。

6.固定搭配：a total of总数为---，故答案为a。

7.句意：一个瑞典人的录制的视频震惊了全世界。根据句意可知此处是what引导的主语从句，从句缺少引导词，缺少宾语，故把which---what。

8.根据前面的a Swedish man可知把She---He。

9.句意：他在窗台上立了一枚硬币，并立了8分钟。根据句意可知此处是并列句，故把or---and。

10.固定句式：Why not do sth. ?故把to去掉。