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6．为了丰富学生的生活，缓解学习压力，校学生会决定举行高二年级广播操比赛．假定你是校学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义用英语写一份书面通知．内容包括：
1．参赛时间：7月 16日下午 （星期六）
2．参赛地点：学校操场；
3．参赛方式：以班级为单位；
4．参赛要求：穿校服，做好准备，积极参与；
5．评奖方式：由校领导和学生组成评奖小组，根据班级总分，评出前六名；
6．联系人：李华 （Tel：44858476）
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可适当发挥，使得行文连贯，不要逐句翻译．
3．标题及结尾已写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：广播操比赛 Broadcast Exercises Competition   校服school uniform
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Answer 1

分析 通知属于应用文，它通常是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、召开会议、传达事情所使用的一种文体．通知分为口头通知和书面通知两种．作为应用文的一种，它在格式、语言及习惯上有其与众不同的特点，只有掌握了这些特点，才能写出规范化的通知．要注意通知语言的简洁明了，内容清晰无误，时态语态准确．
In order to make our school life more colorful and help relax ourselves in the busy school life，our school will hold a Broadcast Exercises Competition on the playground on Friday morning，September 19th．（高分句式一）
All classes of Senior Three are expected to take an active part and it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations．（高分句式二）

解答 One possible version：
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 In order to make our school life more colorful and help relax ourselves in the busy school life，our school will hold a Broadcast Exercises Competition on the playground on Friday morning，September 19th．（高分句式一）（点明活动目的）
 All classes of Senior Three are expected to take an active part and it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations．（高分句式二）Besides，students are required to gather on the playground having on their uniforms．The judges will be made up of experts and students．Prizes will be given according to the total scores of the classes．We'll choose the first six classes as the winners．For any questions，call Li Hua at 44858476．（具体要求和内容）
 Please be on time．Hope you can enjoy it．
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点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．