Question

4．假设你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack给你来信说他最近身体发胖，容易生病，并询问你是如何保持身体健康的．请参考下面的内容给他回信，向他介绍你的饮食习惯，提出建议．要点如下：
1．多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃糖、奶油和巧克力等．
2．多锻炼，运动是健康的保证．
注意：
1．可以适当增加细节．不要逐条翻译．
2．词数在100左右．
3．开头结尾已给出．
Dear Jack，
I am glad to receive your letter．And I am sorry to hear that you are putting on weight and often get ill these days．
                                 ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封书信，根据题目要求向Jack介绍你的饮食习惯，就Jack的身体发胖提出建议，写作要点包括1．多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃糖、奶油和巧克力等．2．多锻炼，运动是健康的保证．写作时以第一人称为主，主要时态为一般现在时．
重点词汇：put on weight （发胖）；saying（谚语）；in one's opinion（在某人看来）；at the same time（同时）；take part in （参加）；keep sb fit（使某人健康）；Look forward to （期待，盼望）．
高分句型：1．There is a saying：You are what you eat．
                 运用谚语增强句子的说服力．
                 2．Remember to have food ①which is low in sugar and fat，②because they can cause you to put on weight easily．
                  ①which引导一个定语从句；②because引导一个原因状语从句．
                 3．I think perhaps the most important thing is①to take part in many kinds of exercises，②whih can keep you fit．
                  ①不定式短语to take part in many kinds of exercises在句中作表语；②which引导一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代上一句提到的事情．

解答 Dear Jack，
I am glad to receive your letter．And I am sorry to hear that you are puting on weight and often get ill these days．
There is a saying：You are what you eat（高分句型一）．Eating habits are very important to our health．In my opinion，you should pay more attetion to what you eat．Remember to have food which is low in sugar and fat，because they can cause you to put on weight easily（高分句型二）．Be sure to have more fruit and vegetables and，at the same time，avoid eating too much cream and chocolate．I think perhaps the most important thing is to take part in many kinds of exercises，whih can keep you fit（高分句型三）．
I hope this will give you some help．
Looking forward to hearing from you．

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．