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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When Nancy got an emergency call from Seattle Hospital, she knew she has no time to waste getting to her mom’s side. While she pulled over to refuel, she found that she’d left her handbag home. Trapped in a truck stop, she felt totally at loss. However, she had to ask for help. Someone sent her up the road to Jim Oliver’s Smoke House, a restaurant where is known for its generosity. In the parking lot, she broke down, tells her story to the owner, Oliver. He gave her a comforting smile while listening patient. Later, much to her astonish, he handed her $ 200 in cash and offered with her a meal.

When Nancy asked how she could pay him back, Oliver waved him on. “You would have done the same if you were me,” said Oliver.

Answer 1

【答案】1.第一句has改为had

2.第二句While改为When

3.第三句loss前加a

4.第四句 However 改为 Therefore

5.第五句 where 改为 which/that

6.第六句tells改为telling

7.第七句patient改为patiently

8.第八句astonish改为astonishment

9.第九句去掉with

10.第十句第二个him改为her

【解析】１.she knew she has no time to waste getting to her mom’s side.本句是含宾语从句的复合句，主句是过去时态，所以从句也要用相应的过去时态，第一句has改为had。

２.因为pull是终止性动词，所以要用ｗｈｅｎ引导时间状语从句，故把第二句While改为When。

３.固定搭配：ａｔ　ａ　ｌｏｓｓ不知所措，故第三句loss前加a。

４.句意：他被困，所以要求助。前后是因果关系，故第四句 However 改为 Therefore。

５.此处a restaurant做先行词，指物，在后面的定语从句中做主语，故第五句 where 改为 which/that

６.句意：她筋疲力尽，向她的老板诉说她的故事。此处是现在分词做伴随状语，故第六句tells改为telling。

７.句意：耐心地听。副词修饰动词，故把第七句patient改为patiently。

８.固定词组：ｔｏ　ｏｎｅ＇ｓ　astonishment使某人吃惊的是。故第八句astonish改为astonishment

９. Offer是及物动词，ｏｆｆｅｒ　ｓｂ．ｓｔｈ．提供给某人某物。故第九句去掉with 。

１０.句意：当Nancy问她怎么回报他时，Oliver向她挥手致意。所以Oliver应该是在向Nancy挥手致意。故第十句第二个him改为her。