Question

【题目】假定你是李华，邢台将要承办某一国际大型运动会，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按照要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：

1.个人情况：高中生；

2.个人条件：英语口语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉邢台；

3.承诺：全心投入，提供最佳服务。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I hear the next International Games will be held in our city, and I’d like to work as a volunteer for the games.

I am a Senior Two student from a key school of Xing Tai. I have such good spoken English that I can communicate fluently with foreigners. Besides, I am a sports fan and on fire for basketball. In my spare time, I always try some voluntary jobs to enrich my extracurricular life. Thankfully, all these experiences help to shape my characters to be out-going, ready to help and easy to get along with. As a Shang Rao local, I will spare no effort to be a good host and make it my responsibility to introduce my hometown to the visitors.

I think I am well fit for serving the Games. If I am allowed to be a volunteer, I promise to fulfill my duty and do my part. Wish a success of the Games!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，邢台将要承办某一国际大型运动会，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按照要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。注意申请信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.个人情况：高中生；2.个人条件：英语口语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉邢台；3.承诺：全心投入，提供最佳服务。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: spoken English英语口语，get along with相处。还使用了宾语从句I hear the next International Games will be held in our city, and I’d like to work as a volunteer for the games.和宾语从句I think I am well fit for serving the Games.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。