Question

14．假如你是张华，最近你们班同学针对发生在青少年身上的交通事故的原因作了一次调查．请你根据下表内容，写一封信给21st Century的编辑，说明你们调查的结果，并提出你的建议．

原因	司机	精力不集中，打手机，超速 酒后驾车
	青少年	不遵守交通规则 自行车车况差 边走边看书、听音乐
建议	（自由发挥，至少两点）

注意：信的格式和首句已给出，不记入总词数
Dear Editor，
    I'm writing to tell you about the survey our classmates did about the causes of traffic accidents involving teenagers．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
                                               Yours faithfully
                                                 Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Because the teenagers don't follow all traffic signs and rules．
高分句型二：
 I think we should correct our bad habits so that there will less accidents．
句型一 Because the teenagers don't follow all traffic signs and rules．该句是一个由because引导的原因状语从句，在句中起到说明原因的作用
句型二   so that there will less accidents 该句是一个由so that 引导的目的状语从句

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm writing to tell you about the survey our classmates did about the causes of traffic accidents involving teenagers．（写信目的）
  Firstly：Because drivers can't concentrate on their driving．While they are driving，they are making phone calls．They don't drive according to the speed limit and they drive over the speed limit．Some drivers drive after drinking．Secondly：Because the teenagers don't follow all traffic signs and rules．（高分句型一）Some of their bikes are in bad condition．Such as，they don't have brakes and bells．Some teenagers are listening to music when they are walking in the street．Some of them don't walk on the sidewalk．Before they cross the road，they don't look carefully．（阐述原因）
  I think we should correct our bad habits so that there will be fewer accidents．（高分句型二）

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