Question

【题目】短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Fatness is one of the serious problems which has a bad effect on our health . At present, the situation with

teenagers is even worse. These days, a discussion was being carried out in our class as to if the students with

weight problem should lose their weight.

Some students think fatness does harmful to our health, because it is necessary to be on diet and take suitable

exercise to prevent it. Those who are overweight should take measure to lose weight to be healthy. But others

have a different opinion. They say lose weight will be bad for teenagers during their growth.

In my opinion, we middle school students should not pay too much attention on our weight. But if we are

getting too fat, wee should take less exercise and not eat junk food.

Answer 1

【答案】

Fatness is one of the serious problems which has a bad effect on our health . At present, the situation with

have

teenagers is even worse. These days, a discussion was being carried out in our class as to if the students with

is whether

weight problem should lose their weight.

Some students think fatness does harm to our health, because it is necessary to be on ∧ diet and take suitable

so a

exercise to prevent it. Those who are overweight should take measure to lose weight to be healthy. But others

measures

have a different opinion. They say lose weight will be bad for teenagers during their growth.

losing

In my opinion, we middle school students should not pay too much attention on our weight. But if we are

to

getting too fat, wee should take less exercise and not eat junk food.

more

【解析】

【1】第1处：has → have 考查谓语动词单复数。先行词是复数名词problems，后面定语从句中谓语动词应与其保持一致，故将has改成have。

【2】第2处：was → is 考查时态。根据本句中的时间状语“these days”可知，本句应用现在进行时，故将was改成is。

【3】第3处：if → whether 考查宾语从句连接词。介词as to（关于）后面的宾语从句用whether(是否)引导，不能用if。故将if改成whether。

【4】第4处：删掉their 考查固定搭配。lose weight“减肥”，为固定搭配，故删掉their。

【5】第5处：because → so 考查连词。逗号后面结果，而非原因，故将but改成so。

【6】第6处：diet前面加a 考查冠词。be on a diet“节食”，故在diet前面加a。

【7】第7处：measure → measures 考查名词单复数。take measures to do“采取措施做……”，故将measure改成measures。

【8】第8处：lose → losing 考查非谓语动词。宾语从句中主语应由动名词充当，故将lose改成losing。

【9】第9处：on → to 考查介词。pay attention to“注意”，为固定搭配，故将on改成to。

【10】第10处：less→ more 考查形容词比较级。根据句意可知，我们应该多锻炼，故将less改成more。