Question

请按以下内容要点写一篇关于你的同学李华的英语短文。

李华是你的好朋友。他是一个诚实的孩子，在学校多次被评为优秀学生。上周的英语期中考试，你发现他用手机作弊，而监考老师没有看见。结果出来后，英语老师还表扬了他取得的成绩。

对于这件事情，你会如何处理，并说明理由。

［写作要求］

1 对所给内容逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2 词数100-120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

My close friend, Lihua is a very nice student who has really given others the impression of an honest guy and many times he was honored as an excellent student in our school.

Last week, when we were taking the mid-term English exam, I suddenly found that he was copying something from cell phone secretly. But the teacher didn't find this at all. When the result was announced, he was praised for getting a very good mark.

As for this, I would let the teacher know the truth even though he is my best friend. Because, I think, it is really a good way to help my friend and get him aware of his mistake so that he will never cheat again.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类短文，只是在最后加上一部分个人的观点，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查提纲类短文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。