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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

On July 18, I, together with my parents, leave for Qinhuangdao at six, which were about 100 kilometers away. As my father was not familiar with the route, so it took us one and a half hours arrive. We first went to the the botanical garden, where there were variously kinds of flowers and plants. At ten o’clock, we set off to pay a visit for the Great Wall in Laolongtou, where we we could see the sights of the Bohai Sea. Touching by the great building, we stayed on the Great Wall to appreciate it for a long time. In the afternoon, we arrived in Yansaihu, which scenery impressed me greatly. They returned at four o’clock, laughing and talking. Tired and happy, we arrived home safe and sound.

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【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述作者一家去秦皇岛游玩的经历。

第一处：考查时态。On July 18，过去的时间状语，谓语动词应用一般过去时，故将谓语动词leave改成left。

第二处：考查主谓一致。Which引导的是非限制性定语从句，指代前面的句子，从句谓语动词应用单数，故将were改成was。

第三处：考查连词。As在这里引导原因状语从句，主句中不能再用so引导，故将so去掉。

第四处：考查固定句型。It takes sb some time to do…，故arrive前加to。

第五处：考查形容词。这里的variously用来修饰kinds做定语，修饰名词作定语用形容词，故将variously改为various。

第六处：考查固定短语。Pay a visit to… 固定短语参观某地，拜访某人，故将for改为to。

第七处：考查非谓语动词。Touching by the great building在句中做伴随状语，touching和主语we是被动关系，是过去分词作状语，故将touching改为touched。

第八处：考查定语从句。which scenery impressed me greatly在本句中为非限制性定语从句，这里的关系代词既指地点Yansaihu，又是后面从句中主语的所有格形式，Yansaihu的风景，故将which改为whose。

第九处：考查代词。全文都在以第一人称we来叙述我们的经历，本句的主语应该表述的是“我们在四点钟返回，边笑边谈论”，故将they改为we。

第十处：考查连词。Tired和happy构成转折关系，故将and改为but。