Question

假如你是李华，你的笔友Jim最近沉溺于玩电脑游戏，为此你很担心。请根据下表提示给Jim写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。

Jim过去	功课好，积极参加学校的各项活动。
Jim现在	对学习没有兴趣，上课不专心，不按时交作业。
你的看法	也许玩电脑游戏能使你放松，但沉溺于其中会占用学习时间……
你的建议	(至少发挥两点)

要求：1．词数80左右。文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；
3．文中不得使用真实人名、校名。
Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.________________________________________
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Best wishes
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can't hand in your homework on time.
Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.
I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your friend, I‘ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.
Best wishes

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