Question

以“Smoking”为题目写一篇短文，词数100左右，内容要求包括：

1、现状：中国吸烟者约占总人口的一半，吸烟者越来越年轻，甚至有少数中学生也在抽烟。

2、原因：有的人认为是时髦（a kind of fashion），有的人认为是乐趣，有的人认为可以提神（refresh oneself）。

3、害处：吸烟有害健康，可导致多种疾病，是一种金钱的浪费。

4、劝告大家不要吸烟。

                                                                     

                                                                      

                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

                   Smoking

Smoking is bad for people’s health. There are more than half people smoking in China. Even though smoking is very bad, the number of smokers keeps growing, and the average age of the smokers is getting younger. Even some students smoke, too. Why do so many people smoke today? Because some people think smoking is a kind of fashion or something interesting. Most people are so busy with their work that they smoke to fresh themselves; however, I don’t think smoking is good. If you smoke too much, you will get diseases. It also costs a lot of money. In order to keep healthy, we should not smoke.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文写作，文章的讨论话题是吸烟。要点都已经给了，考生只需要翻译成中文即可，在写作的时候要变换使用多种句式，使文章充满变化，不那么乏味。同时要选择高级的词汇和合适的连接词，把文章连接成一个整体，更为流畅。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作

点评：本文的话题是考生十分熟悉的抽烟。考生也有话可说，给出的要点也比较全面，用连接词把各要点翻译成中文即可。在写作时仍然要注意作文三大法宝：连接词，高级词汇词组，和高级的句型句式。