Question

【题目】书面表达（满分25分）

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霾天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：

1.感谢他的关注。

2.简介雾霾 (smog）天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。

3.谈谈你保护环境的感想。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅；

开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数；

词数：100左右

Dear David，

I'm glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to use environmentally friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:考查半开放性作文。本文的话题是中国的雾霾。雾霾可以给有呼吸道疾病的人带来生命危险，引起咳嗽，肺癌等。对交通也有很大的影响，能见度低，导致交通事故。在个人感想方面可以从提高人民对于环境保护的意识，多使用健康环保的产品等方面详细展开。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be concerned about 关心；be worried about担忧；such as 例如；hear from收到某人来信；mak a difference 有影响； As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句；So we should do what we can to make a difference.这个句子what we can 是do 的宾语从句；Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.这个句子only+状语，主句用部分倒装 ；