Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，高中开学已经一周了，请根据下表写一封电子邮件告知你的朋友张浩有关你新学校的一些情况。

学校概况	3 000多名学生，40个班级，200多名教职员工
班级情况	高一(5)班：45名学生，其中30名男生、15名女生
班主任	一位女老师，教英语，心地善良、工作严谨
学习科目	语文、数学、英语为必修课，另外还有许多选修课

注意：词数100左右；

参考词汇：员工staff；必修课compulsory course；选修课optional course

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Zhang Hao，

I have been here for a week till now.Everything here is new to me.There are over 3,000 students and 40 classes with more than 200 teachers and staff in our school.The teachers in our school work very hard.Chinese，maths and English are our compulsory courses.Besides，we have many optional courses to choose from，too.I’m in Class 5，Grade 1.There are fortyfive students，thirty boys and fifteen girls.Our English teacher is our head teacher.She is very kind to us，but she is very strict and serious about her work.We all think that she is a good teacher.I’ll do my best in all of my subjects.I hope that you can come to my new school to have a look.

Best wishes，

Yours，

【解析】

试题分析：1. 格式： 与一般书信格式类似（收信人，正文，落款人） 2. 审题时首先抓住要点 如： （1）主题: 介绍新学校的情况 （2）体裁：电子邮件 （3）人称：常为第一人称 （4）时态：视具体情况而定，一般用一般现在时态 3. 认真审阅所给提示，抓住所有细节，找给要点，写出每个要点的 中心词或短语，然后连词成句，连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，描写细致到位，而且使用了多种句式和结构。有一些高级句式，如with more than 200 teachers and staff in our school是介词短语，词汇短语丰富多变，如be new to me对于我来说很新鲜，be kind to 对...很友好，be strict and serious about 对...要求严格，do my best尽自己最大的努力。结尾的I hope that you can come to my new school to have a look.表达了对朋友的热情邀请，语气亲切，符合文章主旨。