分析 本篇书面表达属于议论文.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示,按照一定逻辑关系来写,先写路上汽车越来越多的现象,再分析喜欢喝不喜欢开车的原因. 3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构.比如For those who like driving car,.以及While for the people who don't like driving car,都用了定语从句.Some also think that the car exhausts much carbon dioxide,which has affected the air quality.使用了宾语从句和非限制性定语从句.此外,文章还使用了大量短语 more and more,at one's disposal等,以及副词especially的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯.
Now and then,one or two will come into your sight and it seems that the car has become a whole part of people's life,especially for those in large cities.(高分句型一)
For those who like driving car,they think that car can run much faster than bicycles and can save much of their time.(高分句型二)
Some also think that the car exhausts much carbon dioxide,which has affected the air quality.(高分句型三)
解答 Nowadays,there have been more and more cars in streets and people drive it for work,study or for other purposes.Now and then,one or two will come into your sight and it seems that the car has become a whole part of people's life,especially for those in large cities.(高分句型一)However,some people like to drive cars,while others don't.
For those who like driving car,they think that car can run much faster than bicycles and can save much of their time.(高分句型二)Meanwhile,the car is convenient.When you want to go somewhere,you can drive at your di sposal.Moreover,driving fast is exciting.
While for the people who don't like driving car,they think that driving car is very dangerous.There have been more car accidents in recent years.Some also think that the car exhausts much carbon dioxide,which has affected the air quality.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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