Question

请根据以下表格所提供的内容，写一篇短文。

 

时间	2013年5月27日
地点	市区一十字路口红绿灯路口处
经过	一位妇女带着小女孩闯红灯过马路还辱骂交警，半小时后，女儿返回给交警递上一封道歉信
你的看法	就此事提出自己的看法（至少两点）

 

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1.简述此事；

2.就此事谈谈你的看法（至少两点）。

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27，2013．

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27，2013．Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a  letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.

   People with bad manners can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.

  Luckily, we are also surrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇图表类写作。文章用图表的形式给出了汉语提示信息。这是高考常考的一种命题形式。成文时应注意以下几点：1.文章内容要齐全：（1）时间：2013年5月27日；（2）地点：市区一十字路口红绿灯路口处；（3）经过：一位妇女带着小女孩闯红灯过马路还辱骂交警，半小时后，女儿返回给交警递上一封道歉信；（4）就此事提出自己的看法；2.时态：叙述故事的经过用一般过去时，发表自己的看法用现在时；3.人称：第三人称和第一人称；4.适当使用高级词汇、短语和句型以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用连词和插入语使文章表达自然、流畅。

【亮点说明】使用了非谓语动词的句型：1.Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman.   2.the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a  letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.使用了从句：They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter.3.使用了连词：However, Luckily 4.高级词汇：self-centered, apologize，unintentionally，properly

考点：考查考生的语言运用能力。