Question

短文改错（满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 

 

One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground． They picked it out and found it wounded． Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home． They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water． Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon． When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting．

I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing． Here I call on the public to show respect to nature． Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it．

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental                                                    were

protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground． They picked it out and found                    caught                                   

up

it wounded． Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home． They made a nest for it but fed it

and

with rice and water． Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon． When time came for                                    bird

them∧ fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting．

        to                                             delighted

I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing． Here I call on the public to show respect to nature． Only by       them

changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it．

                                                      well

【解析】略