Question

假设你叫张涛，你在北京的笔友李华生日即将到来。请你给他写一封电子邮件，表示祝贺。邮件要包括以下要点：1.祝他生日晚会上玩得愉快； 2. 介绍你班上周日的爬山活动，并附几张照片； 3. 询问李华的学习情况。
注意：1.内容包括所有要点，但不要逐条翻译；  2.可适当发挥，但行文连贯；3. 词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
Happy birthday ! I hope you’ll have a great birthday party and wish you all the best.
Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs, where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day, It was like a rest from our busy school life. And it was a really unforgettable trip. Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness.
How are things going with you, Li Hua? You have just started your school life in Senior 3. I think your school life is quite busy. Do you have so much pressure? I am  willing to offer you any help at any time if you need.
Please keep in close contact with me .
Yours,
Zhang Tao

试题分析：本文是一篇书信，实际上就是写一封信。也是材料作文，你在北京的笔友李华生日即将到来。请你给他写一封电子邮件，表示祝贺，要点都给出了，要表达清楚全面，本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。还要用适当的关联词把句子串联起来，使文章更加连贯。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】 因为是书信，这篇范文写的比较简洁，但是句式还是富有变化的，如：Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs, where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day,这句话用了定语从句Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness. 这句话用了过去分词做定语，和be attached to这个词组， I am  willing to offer you any help at any time if you need. 这句话用了词组be willing to do和at any time。