Question

12．文中有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出该加的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分．
3．必须按要求做题，否则不给分．
Dear Mary，
I receive your E-mail just now．Don't worry about me．I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab．But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English．The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests．I'm afraid I can't agree with you．I know it is difficulty to learn English，but it is widely used in the world today．It will be important tool in our future work．Beside，it is becoming more and more important in our daily life．If you study hard，you will be succeed．Do r emember that where there is a will，there is a way．I'm looking forward to hear good news from you．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍作者劝说Mary不要放弃学习英语，虽然学习英语很难，但英语在日常生活中变得越来越重要．并让她请记住：有志者事竟成．

解答 Dear Mary，
I receive your E-mail just now．Don't worry about me．I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab．But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English．The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests．I'm afraid I can't agree with you．I know it is difficulty to learn English，but it is widely used in the world today．It will be∧important tool in our future work．Beside，it is becoming more and more important in our daily life．If you study hard，you will be succeed．Do r emember that where there is a will，there is a way．I'm looking forward to hear good news from you．
详解：
1．receive改为received 考查动词时态．句中时间状语just now表示过去时间，用一般过去时．
2．greatly改为great 考查形容词．surprise是名词，前面应该用形容词great修饰，而不是副词greatly修饰．
3．learn改为learning 考查动名词．give up后面接动名词作宾语，不接动词原形．
4．because改为that 考查连词．the reason后接表语从句是完整的，用that引导，because不和reason连用．
5．interests改为interest 考查名词．interest意为"兴趣"，是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
6．difficulty改为difficult 考查形容词．be difficult to do sth．意为"做某事是难的"，应该用形容词作表语，而difficulty是名词．
7．important前加an 考查冠词．tool是可数名词，单数形式前要加不定冠词a，因important的读音是以发元音开头的，用不定冠词an．
8．Beside改为Besides 考查副词．besides意为"而且"，是副词，而beside意为"在…旁边"，是介词，此处应是"而且"之意．
9．去掉be 考查词语用法．succeed是实义动词，不是形容词，前面不用be动词．
10．hear改为hearing 考查动名词．to是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．