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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello, everyone. Welcome to our school. Now I’d like to introduce our school to you. Our school is located in the north part of the city. It’s famous as its beautiful scenery. There lie a lake in our school, that students can boat. Close to our school is a beautiful park with flower around. Every class is made up 50 lively students. They are warm, generous but ready to offer help. They feel honoured when ask for help. So they are very friendly and easy to get along with them. You will have the wonderful time and get used to the life soon.

【答案】1. north→northern

2. as→for

3. lie→lies

4. that→where

5. flower→flowers

6. up后加of

7. but→and

8. ask→asked

9. 去掉them

10. the→a

【解析】本文主要是介绍一所学校的情况。

1. 考查形容词作定语。句意;我们学校位于城市的北部。修饰名词part的应是形容词。故north 改为northern.

2. 考查固定搭配。句意:我们学校因其美丽的风景而出名。be famous for…因(某事)而出名;be famous as… 因(身份)……而出名故把as改成 for。

3. 考查主谓一致。句意:学校有一个湖。主语是a lake,谓语用单数。故lie改为lies。

4. 考查非限制性定语从句。句意:学校有个湖,学生们可以在这个湖里划船。湖(a lake)是先行词,在定语从句中作地点状语,故只能用where引导,不能用that。

5. 考查名词。公园里有许多花,“花”要用复数。

6. 考查固定搭配。be made up of………组成。

7. 考查连词。句意:他们热情大方,乐于助人。是并列关系(and)而非转折关系(but),故but 改为and。

8. 考查非谓语作状语。句意:当他们被求助时他们感到荣幸。与逻辑主语they是被动关系,应用过去分词作状语。

9. 考查动词不定式句意:他们很友好而且很容易相处。them为多余,逻辑宾语为句子主语

10. 考查固定搭配。句意:你会度过一段美好的时光。have a wonderful time“过得愉快”。故把the改为a。

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