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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I enter the primary school. With modern life go rapidly nowadays, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people's lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, but nowadays I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I'll pay more attention on studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.

Answer 1

【答案】①have→has

②enter→entered

③go→going

④kind→kinds

⑤become后加a

⑥去掉but

⑦health→healthy

⑧me→myself

⑨on→to

⑩hardly→hard

【解析】该文讲述作者的梦想是想成为一名医生，并决定为之努力。

①have→has 考查主谓一致。主语为everyone，谓语动词用单数。故将have改为has。

②enter→entered 考查谓语。since引导的从句用一般过去时态。故把enter改为entered。

③go→going 考查非谓语动词。with+宾语+宾补，宾补动词go与宾语life为主动意义关系，用doing形式作宾语补语。故将go改为going。

④kind→kinds 考查名词。different kinds of各种不同的。故将kind改为kinds。

⑤become后加a 考查冠词。docter是可数名词单数，故在become后加a。

⑥去掉but Athough引导让步状语从句，but连接的句子是并列句，因此but和atthough不能一起用。故将athough去掉。

⑦health→healthy 考查形容词。保持健康keep healthy。故将health改成healthy。

⑧me→myself 考查反身代词。该处意为“告诉我自己”，代词用myself。故将me改为myself。

⑨on→to 考查介词。pay attention to注意……为固定搭配。故将on改为to。

⑩hardly→hard 考查副词。work hard努力学习，hardly意为“几乎不”。故将hardly改为hard。