Question

请你以“The Great Person I Admire”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：
1． 从下表中选择对你影响最大的一位伟人并描述他（她）的主要事迹；
2． 谈谈伟人对你产生的激励作用。
注意：字数100-120；标题不计入总词数。
参考词汇：动物学家zoologist  n. 黑猩猩 chimp  n. 杂交的 hybrid  adj.

Jane Goodall（1934-），Britain	LinQiaozhi(1901-1983), China	Yuan Longping(1930-), China
* 动物学家* 前往非洲研究黑猩猩多年* 在研究和保护野生动物方面做出巨大贡献	* 妇科专家* 致力于妇科疾病的研究* 在妇产学科方面做出巨大贡献	* 农业专家* 致力于杂交水稻研究* 在消除世界饥饿方面做出巨大贡献

 

Answer 1

Of the three great person, I would like to choose Yuan Longping, an agricultural pioneer of China. It is known that there exists hunger in many countries. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping has devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly,
Yuan Longping is willing to share his achievement with others, which contributes to ridding the world of hunger.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.

试题分析：本文是一篇人物传记类短文。本文选择其中一位进行写作，审题时注意在此类文章中通常使用过去时讲述此人所做过的事情。本文的要点给出的并不是很多，考生一定要做是的的发挥，可以使用阅读理解中的相应句式来进行填充，要使用高级句式，让文章富有变化，更有可读性。
点评：对于人物传记类写作要注意时态，在写作的时候可以加上适当的想象，做适当的扩充。连词，高级词汇，高级句型这写作三要素仍然不能缺少。