分析 母亲在我生日时总会给我买礼物,我觉得出生在这样一个家庭真幸运.十五岁生日快到了,母亲问我想要什么,我告诉她我不要礼物,我想帮助别人.我用母亲给的钱买了很多礼物送给孤儿院的孩子,真开心.
解答 My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays.With my fifteen birthday around the corner,she asked me∧I wanted.For the first time,I realize how lucky I was to have been born in such a fortunate family.I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed.That was because I told my mother that instead of get an expensive gift,I'd love to use the money to help others.At the first,she felt surprised.When she realized I was seriously,she offered me 500yuan.I bought some toys and went to the orphanage(孤儿院) in our city.I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.
详解:
1.to改为for;介词错误.buy sth for sb给某人买某物.
2.fifteen改为fifteenth;序数词错误.句意表达的是第十五个生日,要用序数词.
3.加what;连词错误.句中I wanted作asked的宾语,是一个宾语从句;参加缺少宾语,且句意指代的是物,要用what来连接.
4.realize改为realized;时态错误.文章讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
5.satisfying改为satisfied;形容词错误.句意表达的是我的感受,要用过去分词构成的形容词.
6.because改为why;连词错误.because后接原因,句中I told my mother that instead of get an expensive gift表达的是结果,要用why来连接.
7.get改为getting;动名词错误.句中get作介词of的宾语,要用动名词形式.
8.the去掉;冠词错误.at first一开始,固定短语.
9.seriously改为serious;形容词错误.句中serious作系动词的表语,要用形容词形式.
10.child改为children;名词错误.句意表达的是复数.
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.
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